Eden

another inspiration from Ana Sophia http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AnaD/1448524/

with you
I can be
undressed
but not feel
naked.

in the garden
before the shame
there was
perfect love --
sinless.

and in these
secret moments,
you are my
own private
Eden.

Author's Note

Reviews

[NoelHC]

That is a good space to be in, where it is so good it is innocent.
This rolled out like a three act play, well done.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you sir, I rather liked this one myself.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The act of love making is the most beautiful thing in the world, even out of wedlock…
this is really a delightfully tender and sensual poem.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for stopping in. I love your Christmas kitty!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome, and thank you… I use it every year.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem.
"with you
I can be
undressed
but not feel
naked."
The above lines are very true. When we feel free and unafraid. We know love and truth. Thank you dear Poet for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, as always, my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[willweb]

Beautiful, this is the perfect fit to Ana's poem. Love is like this, when fears are forgotten and freedom of expression and self seems to be the rule.

[Lyn Anderson]

Nice of you to say so, thank you.

[Matching Socks]

That is gorgeous KL.
Beautiful music too.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, my inspiring friend.

[Matching Socks]

My pleasure. :)

[Delmar Cooper]

I think your sentiments are lovely. Eden is a lovely concept. Why then would I prefer buck naked sin in a briar patch? "In his own image!" I should smile.

[Lyn Anderson]

Ah, thanks, I think, just as well I know you only as a naked tree.

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮oooooohhhhh I love this one! ╰☆╮

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you, I thought you would.:)

[Rene Salinas]

Oh I'm loving this !

So true naked is not a physical feeling. Before the storm the innate - calm moment. The desire for exploration through desire and passion.

Anyday, anytime anyplace.

Great stuff

Thankyou

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you so much, I appreciate it.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love the opening stanza, it drags the reader in and the flow of this simple romantic piece is captured in the imagination.

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, thanks, from the king of swooning romance.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hardly! lol

[Rita L. Sev]

Ooh! Romance, at its heart - so simple, and simply touching, KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

Ahh, thank you, I appreciate that.