Time (10W+1)

Time (10W+1)

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

his favourite thing to say - no one got the inside joke so I added on the extra W

"
 
Time will tell,
he says

so far
the b***h isn't
tocking.



© 2018 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
don't think too hard.

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Some tock too much and never know when it's time to stop. Often it's when the big hand is...no wait, I didn't just say that. :) At least it isn't ticking, so no bomb scare here. A fun one KL.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks. I am surprised how some people took it very harshly. I guess the b word threw them.
Ahh, time will tell, one of my favorite expressions. ; ) Very punny! Loved it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

You should, you are one of two people who annoy me with this expression.:)
NoelHC

4 Years Ago

Umm, yeah, I figured that out, it was why I could not resist the comment!
Hahah … clever … there is always time for a pun.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks. Weirdly, some people didn't get it. I was perplexed at this, in this sea of big brains.
Pryde Foltz

4 Years Ago

I know this huge humongous head … I mean brain … needs coffee to produce. But time pieces have a.. read more
Pryde Foltz

4 Years Ago

See what heartbreak and a couple glasses of rose can do to me.
Nice use of words. You said a handful in so few words. I liked these words. Thank you Dear friend for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks, I appreciate it, as always.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

A very entertaining poem.
With each moment passing, you still refuse to move your hands?

Sorry,
couldn't resist.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

That is awesome. Don't say sorry. I love it.
who's thinking when I have a "tocking" and then "ticking" 10W?? not me.. never think anyway but now that I have permission, well... Im just sighing with Enya ..

time will tock, as time also ticks and KL you always have the imagination to know which is which... as for the rest of us, we just ask for 11W please... ;0)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Well, at first it was 10 W with one of the words not counting. But that just confused people. I have.. read more
redzone

4 Years Ago

hey, I live on the 13th floor... ;-p maybe you can wave as you go by??!!! poems with inside jokes ar.. read more
LOL...good one. This made me laugh.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lol! That was priceless!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

This does seem a lot like something you might write. You had me inspired lady.:)
Matching Socks

4 Years Ago

It's funny as hell, I love it!
I'm thought you were talking about a clock---tick tock---. 10W could indicate some type of lubricating oil....I'm familiar with 10W-40. He sprays the clock with oil to get it to go tick tock? I have no idea.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

You actually came the closest. You win the prize of my respect for your quirky mind.
Bright Ocean Star

4 Years Ago

God, I'm sorry my typing is terrible. I don't know why I typed "I'm thought"...just careless I supp.. read more
Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

I will pm you.
This acidity here requires imagination to arrive to. It is not the easiest come up with either. My interpretation of tocking however must be the wrong one as I am nerd enough to know the meaning of the word. Lets hope his smell doesn't linger.

Thankyou

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

It's a play on words and numbers Rene, and not nearly so acid as some are interpreting.
Rene Salinas

4 Years Ago

Oops I had the feeling I was going to be wrong.... I apologize..

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