Time (10W+1)

Time (10W+1)

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

his favourite thing to say - no one got the inside joke so I added on the extra W

"
 
Time will tell,
he says

so far
the b***h isn't
tocking.



© 2018 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
don't think too hard.

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you pack a lot in this little treasure .. i thought the (10W) meant words but since counting has not escaped me yet (at least up to 20) i am wrong .. since you admonish not to think too hard i will simply puzzle over it for a bit ..
i agree with John Gabriel adding that there is also humor .. what a gem of a poem
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Let's just say one word doesn't count. :)
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

:)) OK! ... poetic license is just all right by me! gotta love it!
E.
Great play on words "tocking" for "talking"....loved it. Lydi**

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate that.
This is harsh, brutal and very cleverly done. So much venom in such a small bite!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Thanks sometimes my comedy has bite.
Very clever...ha-ha! I enjoy your mind quips so much!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
Haha! This really did make me chuckle aloud, KL! Thank you!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate it.
HA! I see what you did there! That was pretty funny!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Thanks, just lightening it up a bit.

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