Confound me

Confound me

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

some more packaged thoughts.

"

his earth


despite the fact
he confounds me,

heart pounds me,
surrounds me,
drowns me,
in kisses from
the tip of my nose
to the tops
of my toes --

and in this act
he grounds me,
to his earth.

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sips of sanity --

he offered me
his cup,

I drank to
fill me up.

and need
became want.

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Memories

elicit
emotions
extending

insistent
instants
into

me

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Stolen,
Broken into;
violated --

for once
you needed me
just as much
as I needed you.

and I didn't have
to steal my after kisses --
you let them in
and I felt you

dream.



© 2018 Lyn Anderson


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The journey to make that connection… I like the way you end with "dream." It speaks to me of hope that the connection made grows into a lifelong commitment.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate it.
MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

yw :)
This is another that takes you on a journey through each small section. I love this, KL! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Aww thanks. Have you written more of your book? Would love to get back to it.
Madalyn Beck

4 Years Ago

I am working on it! I'm hoping to post some more soon. :)
I dream, I just usually don't remember them anymore. But when I dream of my love, I always remember those dreams.

In those dreams my ego isn't inflated and I don't get in my own way. Unfortunately, my reality isn't the same as my dreams. But I do still try to keep my ego in check.

Very good write KL.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
realmwriter

4 Years Ago

You are very welcome.
Memories

elicit
emotions
extending

insistent
instants
into

me

Those early days of love before the ego wrestles back their affection. Great penning, KL>

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate it.
Amazing poetry dear Poet. A sensitive journey into emotion and contentment. I like the set-up of the poem. Allowed the reader to fall in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your extended visit.
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

I enjoyed your poetry. My last poems to be read. I begin my four days of work.
I just love these KL... EACH poem letting us into a world of such emotion that one could really feel each piece. I admire how you grouped these writes together and the formatting... Brilliantly done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind words.
Wonderful thoughts. These tiny little poems are not dimunitive at all- even a small diamond is a diamond.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate your kindness always.
lots to like about this ... love the scattered form .. "his earth" that all by itself is fantastic to me .. a refreshing shout out to the man ;) .. his common sense grounds sanity .. gives memories .. then the turn in your last three verses .. aaaaaarg! tell me it hasn't gone wrong!!!! really like this one KL!! for sure!
E.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

There is no turn. Read it again. Thank you.
Einstein Noodle

4 Years Ago

perhaps this threw me a bit:
"Stolen,
Broken into;
violated --" .... i see the ch.. read more
you know KL this was just "confounded" good!!! to want and need someone, to be able to love and make love, and feel them "dream"..... SIGH and when they feel the same toward you, DAMN!!! I want some of your "confoundness".... I hope you can tell I loved your "packaged thoughts", what will happen when your thoughts are "unpacked"... ;0)

~~redzone

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks for your enthusiastic review.
You are confounding us with your magical writes...Excellent collection of thoughts...:).........

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Aww very sweet, thank you.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome....)...........

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