nestled in your cloud

nestled in your cloud

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/erin-cilberto/1741430/ to Jacob, for your inspiration

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we came together
in a climate
of uncertainty

forecast tempests
did not come
to pass --

I spend my days
nestled in your
cloud --

so cool on the
outside,

yet warm and
secure

in the eye
of your love --

there is no need
for a raincoat

when you spend
your days
making rain.


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heaven bends
to meet
the clouds
at my feet
every inch of you
greets
the open sky
inside me
as I
surrender
to your
rain.



© 2018 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
my tribute to jacob's poem http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/erin-cilberto/1741430/

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love beyond the midst of uncertainty, that thrives, nonetheless, because it is real - framed in nature and rain - feel like dancing under the rain

steph

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

thanks so much. I credit jacob's poem for this.
i love this poem...what startling imagery----nestled in nature....thank you for writing this...glad i could lend a touch of inspiration...and by the by...great song...love the Eurythmics...
j.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

I am glad you liked it. I have another one -- not sure where it fits, quite yet.
Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

There was only place I could put the other one. And so it becomes the second part to this piece.
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V
Somehow I feel it's related to your other new poem (the one about trading raincoats for umbrellas). It's a nice one again and it reminds me of some of my older writings. It has a calm and relaxed yet cool tone I adore.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thank you, yes, the thoughts and the inspirations came together, for sure.
V

3 Years Ago

I see, it is an enjoyable and lovely read. :)

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