the icing on my cake at the end of the day

gotta follow up the sex with some sentiment

it's okay
that we each
have our own lives....

we
are never
hampered
by clothes
in hampers,
and dishes
in the sink;
all the things
we think
don't matter,
but do.
by maintaining
a me and you,
you and I
have managed
to stay a
we

i miss you
every day
and if
i had to
guess
i'd say
you are
beginning
to feel
the same
way.

that crave
in the middle
of the day
still wondering
it hasn't
gone away
 ...

you are bent
just the right
way
for me.

your crooked sense
of humour
is only
the start.

you fit me
perfectly
in every
part.

Author's Note

Reviews

[barleygirl]

My favorites are the first & last . . . felt really impactful & convincing. As for first one, so often the daily drudgery BECOMES the relationship & this is why I never cared to live with someone in my life. As for the last one, I just the love the playful original physicality of it (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Lyn Anderson]

oh my I miss you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful flow of words and thoughts. You made me believe every words. It is nice when things fall into a perfect place. Thank you Lyn for sharing the amazing poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Lyn Anderson]

Love the ones you pick to peruse. Thanks

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lyn.

[Neville]

Gotta be love innit........N

[Lyn Anderson]

Thanks. And it still is. That's the best part.:)

[Neville]

Told ya..........N

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I love the format of your poem, how the words writhe on the screen like bodies on sheets. Once again, another erotic gem to thrill the senses.

[Lyn Anderson]

Goes to show you what happens in your absence. A long overdue thank you.

[Érenn]

Wow I was so immersed in the words I never realised the unique presentation here. This is good in so many ways. I loved the second stanza and the last 3 stanzas the most. The poem in general is really good, it's just that these 4 stood out for me. Love this unique structure of yours, funny thing I actually experimented on the same lines in the poem I posted today. I love this a lot since it affects the senses in more than one ways.

For me there is so much more to this than the seductive and sensual feel. I could also feel that lovely connection and bond shared between the two mentioned here. ^^ This is well executed. Your words invoke some good imagery and interesting thoughts for me. Thank you for sharing ^^ I loved it ^^

[Lyn Anderson]

Well thank you very much. I appreciate it. Truth is, it is the way I have always written, a seed of an idea morphing into multiple poems of a similar theme - I used to edit them and separate them, but now I present them as a whole.

[Lydia Shutter]

That itch that can't be scratched, that passion that stays lit through every day and night....yes, that is what is missing from so many lives. So very sensual and seductive, KL. Good one. Lydi**

[Lyn Anderson]

yes, it is pretty special, and maybe even more appreciated when it's never been that way before. :)Thanks for the read and review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oooh, sexy....to fit in every way...and not hampered by clothes in hampers or on us...mmm.

yes, that crave that won't go away.

[Lyn Anderson]

So far yes, and thank you for your read and review.

[Matching Socks]

This is so super to feel this way. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

yes, it is. thanks for popping in.

[redzone]

Really nice to feel this way KL.. I especially liked those last few lines.. the "fit"...

redzone

[Lyn Anderson]

thank you. nice to see you again. my poor sleepy joe poem is very lonely. :) not enough pizazz I guess.:)