random turn of events

inspired by Jon Roggie http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/jtrogue/1760355/

an invitation,
unexpected --
accepted
last minute
one of three --
you seemed
to fit my
schedule,
so I thought
I would see
we must have
talked for
an hour,
I thought you
were quite nice --
but then
I asked you
for a kiss,
and nothing
would be
the same
after this
spot of
randomness...

Author's Note

captcha flighty

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

That's really sweet. :)
Randomness is refreshing.

[Jon Roggie]

Isn't it fun when the words take a turn? Also, you made me blush.

[Lyn Anderson]

Glad to make you blush.:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

either the friendship turned to romance, or it was so awkward the friendship ended....have had both happened...related doubly to this...and am probably way off...but often, moments turn life one way or another...

i appreciate this read.

j.

[Lyn Anderson]

actually, you are pretty on the money, in terms of one thing turning into another, and yes, I have had both happen ... Thank you as always for reading and reviewing.

[Einstein Noodle]

your closing opens a wide door for exploration ;) life turns on the proverbial dime sometimes for sure .. i think thats what i like the best of this poem ..it's singular "moment" and its expansive possible "rest of the story" ..nice one my friend!
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

I find my inspirations everywhere, and this one is thanks to Jon Roggie -- whose words are simple, but thoughtful. He claims to ramble, but there is always a logic to his random.:)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .................