lightweight when it comes to you

lightweight when it comes to you

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

when I heard this song

"

not like that


I want to
get this one
right
I want to
want you
always
in all
the ways
I wanted you
from the moment
my lips
touched yours
that is why
I don't want you
in ways
I had others
before.


resist me

oh baby

don't say
you don't
want to
see me
when it
isn't true
we both
know
it's just
dangerous --

so hot
that kiss
you can't
resist ..

just the thought

when just the thought

of that first kiss
makes me weak
in the knees --
who cares what
you call it,
just do that
to me
please.








© 2018 Lyn Anderson


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I'm old school. Slow and easy. Tempting and waiting make the final place sweeter. I enjoyed all the poetry. Thank you Lyn for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Such a pleasure to host you -- come on in and have a drink.:)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are very kind.
For what my opinion is worth, you got this one right from the beginning till the very end, spot on..... Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. I truly appreciate you taking the time to stop and leave your thoughts
Neville

1 Year Ago

my pleasure entirely....
I love the way each of these stanzas conveys a different kind of longing, some to be resisted, others not. I always love the way a somewhat tiny point is being made in each message . . . just barely touching upon a point, as reflected in the skinny typesetting style, a barely-there statement with deep meaning, & the reader is left knowing exactly what you mean.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much. What a great review.
this is what I would call "a more weak kneed kisses please" poem.. yep, no excuses, don't stop just more please... but I suspect that the kisses you share are anything but "lightweight", I'd think more "dangerous", "intense" "all that and a bag of skittles"...

redzone

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

I think so, but, hey, what do I know ...:)
redzone

3 Years Ago

the weak knees are the give away... lol
i remember that "weak in the knees" thing...especially with a Certain first love...

"i don't want you in ways i had others before" Amen to that.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I am having real troubles with just this website right now -- was able to view poems.. read more

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Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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