Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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shaking the bitter

shaking the bitter

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
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another collaborative effort with Jon Roggie and Papaya http://www.writerscafe.org/AnaPapaya http://www.writerscafe.org/jtrogue

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Look at the gathering fog,
and feel my forced smile.
shake it off,
bitter is not my way ...

trap my tears
where they begin,
no need to allow
their salty pain in ...

while the feelings
are still there,
time has passed
if not the memories ...

they are where
they should reside
in another life,
with the other me ...

framed within
the glass of time,
each grain of sand
a brand new day ...

seeping slowly
from the fog
let not this love,
my life, fade away.


© 2016 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
http://www.writerscafe.org/AnaPapaya
http://www.writerscafe.org/jtrogue


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the other me...the one in the past---oh but he is always trying to catch up...

it is hard to let go...it is hard to shake that fog.

really nice collaboration...sounds like one voice, not three...well blended...

j.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

Thanks. The three of us do play really well off of each other -- and it does work as one voice -- we.. read more
Papaya

7 Years Ago

Jacob,
Thank you so much. I feel honoured to be among such talent here and these two are not.. read more
Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

Thank you. It was fun!
Nicely melancholy statement describing the struggle of bitterness with many vivid & creative phrases . . . my fave: "they are where they should reside in another life, with the other me ..."

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

ya ya you are such a pain.:):)
Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

Don't listen to them. I am a complete monster.
barleygirl

7 Years Ago

Love watching you guys have fun *smile*
"while the feelings/are still there/time has passed/if not the memories..." so very well said... The poem brings some peaceful thoughts in my mind which I love... The ending leaves a hopeful note... Lovely work by 3 of you...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 7 Years Ago


Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

Thank you. This was a work finished after missed messages, nagging by my part, and finally, we woun.. read more
Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

Thanks very much. This one was started, and then life intervened. In the end I think it turned out v.. read more
Papaya

7 Years Ago

Thanks from me too Dhiman!
Super final product. Mwah.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

Mwah to you too. If only work and raising kids was as easy as working with you two.:)
Papaya

7 Years Ago

Oh yeah, ditto that.
I am all alone this week though. So quiet without the kids.
I wou.. read more
Jon Roggie

7 Years Ago

It is certainly easier than dealing with a fourteen year old. This one feels different. I mean bet.. read more

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Added on August 9, 2016
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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