What I wouldn't do

What I wouldn't do

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

for you

"
Crickets chatter
in moon kissed
meadows just
outside your
window ...

The world 
beyond wonder,
my chest 
pressed against 
your back

Tears, once angry,
now quietly 
fold you 
into my 
dreams ...

it is here; now,
in these moments --
I don't know
what I wouldn't do
for you ...


© 2018 Lyn Anderson


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Lyn Anderson

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When love steal our mind and heart. We know true peace and joy.
"it is here; now,
in these moments --
I don't know
what I wouldn't do
for you …"
I love the above lines dear Lyn. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I always enjoy coming back
a strong, heartfelt write. being with the one we love - doesn't get much better than that. sometimes we don't realize what we have until we lose it and find ourselves missing it and will do anything to get it back. the wording is so sweet and beautiful. great opening and powerful closing. awesome song to boot. deep breath and sigh ... :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Lucky me I have it and know I do ...:) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Lucky me I have it and know I do ...:) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Love the closing..... Mmmm when loving like this then it's beautiful.....:))

Posted 1 Year Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Yes. It is. I can tell you know
That is one hell of a lucky guy, if you ask me.... who in their right mind aint gonna love this little gem..... Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


Neville

1 Year Ago

Dave's a lucky geezer den.....
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

He escaped all that mushy love crap:)
Neville

1 Year Ago

..........yeah write on.....N
Tender and loving thoughts conveyed in this beautiful poem. A moment in time.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. I swear I replied already. Maybe it was written in my head
This is a lovely poem. I like the way it flows from a dreaminess to a quiet intensity. I particularly like the scene you set in the first stanza.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. It appears my comments disappeared

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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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