five minutes more

five minutes more

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

inspired by the song, among other things

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I hear that song

and in my mind

I see your face ...


and I know instantly,

I never again 
want to be 
with anyone 


who doesn't 

make me crave

another 5 minutes
in their embrace.



© 2019 Lyn Anderson


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Lyn Anderson

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Simply stated with lovely intentions. Rhyming to music and feelings. I embrace your poetry.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

9 Months Ago

Thank you darling. A little note for my love on a cold and dreary day
Sami Khalil

9 Months Ago

Nothing like it. Keep them coming. You are welcome.
This is so wonderful and lovely

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

Too kind. Thank you for the visit
What a nice little romantic poem. When you find someone who makes you feel like that always appreciate them.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

I have and I do. Thank you hon!
a little gem if ever there was....

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

Thank you my friend
Neville

10 Months Ago

always a pleasure... and always mine...
it's funny how that '5 more minutes' is so important, when the longing for them lasts so much longer when they are gone.... it's a very moving poem Lyn...

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

Too kind my friend
It's beautifully done....Ah I would always say 10 mins more hehehe.... :p 5 mins seems less...
Just stay 10 mins more....That's why your title pulled me here.... :)
And when you can never get enough of their hugs and kisses....That's what we end up saying ... few more mins.... at doorsteps of heaven...

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating my little love note
This might be small but definitely impactful. There's no pretense in it, a straightforward gesture. Good work

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

Pretense isn't my style. Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
Minutes and hours, we try to make them a lifetime, if we could with someone we need. Wonderful and kind words shared dear Lyn. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

Lucky to know that feeling. Thank you
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

You are right. Seconds and minutes leave us wishing for more and you are welcome Lyn.
So beautifully encapsulating the complexities of all we are and have been, and always will be. Life can be good and life can be bad, but whatever or whoever comes our way, we will never settle for someones second best. Standards should never lower to anothers level, they should be head to head and side by side. Equal.
Beautifully captured.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

Thank you. A little gift for my love to brighten the day.

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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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