five minutes more

five minutes more

A Chapter by Lyn Anderson
"

inspired by the song, among other things

"

I hear that song

and in my mind

I see your face ...


and I know instantly,

I never again 
want to be 
with anyone 


who doesn't 

make me crave

another 5 minutes
in their embrace.



© 2019 Lyn Anderson


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You are such a good writer especially love poetry, you have a way with words. Kudos!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

oh wow, pleased to make your acquaintance, 2 years later
You are the best at making a connection between a handful of relatable inputs & painting a fulsome tapestry of how this connection makes so much sense (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

10 Months Ago

what a great comment
Those moments of wanting linger a few more minutes in our lover’s embrace before having to face the real world

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping in
Poetic Beauty

4 Years Ago

You are welcome
Five minutes is all
it takes to know
that loving feeling
and craving for more

nicely penned

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks for takung the time
I had a bottle of beer like this once. I never wanted to put it down.
On a more serious note, finding that special someone is one of life's treasures.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Years Ago

Thanks for happening by
Simply stated with lovely intentions. Rhyming to music and feelings. I embrace your poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Thank you darling. A little note for my love on a cold and dreary day
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

Nothing like it. Keep them coming. You are welcome.
This is so wonderful and lovely

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Too kind. Thank you for the visit
What a nice little romantic poem. When you find someone who makes you feel like that always appreciate them.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

I have and I do. Thank you hon!
a little gem if ever there was....

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Thank you my friend
Neville

5 Years Ago

always a pleasure... and always mine...
it's funny how that '5 more minutes' is so important, when the longing for them lasts so much longer when they are gone.... it's a very moving poem Lyn...

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

Too kind my friend

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Added on January 8, 2019
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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