dandelions & pink memories

dandelions & pink memories

A Poem by Lyn Anderson
"

the sky is quiet

"

dandelions

dot the green grass

like sunny spectators

lining up for the big show

assembled patiently

with their sisters

laden in fuzzy white coats

all dressed up

and no where to go ...

 

they're just

waiting

for the

wind to blow.


pink memories


clog my mind


cotton candy


suffocating


sweet

 

love notes


whisper in the red moon


morning


the sky quiets me


when I can't


think of anything


but running back


to you ...

 

pencil me into your notebook

and I'll sign on the dotted line

the one that says I'm yours

and you're mine ...

 

I draw you in my mind

fill me with your pen ...


© 2019 Lyn Anderson


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WOW

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

love your notes too i was never very good at staying in the lines also so now i just use blank paper
Lyn Anderson

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks. Never thought of staying in the lines. I just do what suits me ... it's funny, been doing po.. read more
What a nice way of looking at those dandelions. I enjoyed this scattering of romantic love notes across the page.


Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you. I was, quite literally, looking at a field of dandelions
Wonderful poetry shared dear Lyn.
"pencil me into your notebook
and I'll sign on the dotted line
the one that says I'm yours
and you're mine …"
The above lines sweet and needed. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Weeks Ago

you are too kind, thank you
ohhhhhhhhh boy...poets in love! danger danger danger ;))) that is the best attitude on dandelions I have ever heard ... I tend to sound the alarm when I see their armies rising up ;) the contrast with pink is delicious ... interesting you speaker has tasted too much ... your red moon morning skies are also very interesting and dramatic for me ..red skies in the morning...sailors take warning ;) your verses are like bursts of inspiration taken down at different times on scraps of this and that so as not to forget them ... the overall feeling of a lasting love ... through all the different aspects of a heart and life is what I get from your form and font ... so...Lyn... is he writing love poems for you?? ;))))))))
E.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Einstein Noodle

4 Weeks Ago

yes.... two poets together needs a strong flexible flame retardant bag to hold all the passion ;)))).. read more
Lyn Anderson

4 Weeks Ago

Yes. That's one of our favourite movies. In my case, my poet was more a deceiver and less a romantic
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

bad on him ..his loss in every way ... one can never shine by smearing one's self with sludge .. Pri.. read more
I see a kind of connection between the stanzas being each is waiting patiently waiting for an outcome. Nice one, Lyn.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Lyn Anderson

4 Weeks Ago

Thank you. As with all my collective poems, they can be a cohesive piece or several poems connected .. read more
my oh' my.. what a quadruple delight you have gifted us this fine mane.. she has still got it.. I see

Neville

Posted 1 Month Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Month Ago

Thank you Neville. I have posted a couple new ones and figured I'd better feature them before postin.. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Month Ago

as the years roll by, tis no less a pleasure to visit and hear from thee :)

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Added on June 17, 2019
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Tags: dandelions, love, whisper, moon

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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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