u muse me

u muse me

A Poem by Lyn Anderson
"

collective love notes

"

Somewhere between unrealised expectations

and your kitchen counter,

we met --

 

It wasn't anything we recognised

we imagined

might be ...

 

Somewhere between want and need

we both found something

entirely new --

 

It wasn't what we thought


It was

so much more …


Lying beside you in the dark


I wonder the words


you hide inside your heart -


but only sometimes ...


Most times,


 I am just happy


you're here with me



Sunshine morning feeling 

whispers of him inside her


Wondering sometimes if

her love is enough -


Always standing on the edge

looking over -


Does he 

want more ...

than she can give


More

than she can be? 


His to lose

 and hers to set free


A heart that found 

more in him


Than every certain possibility



There are times 

when hesitation

seems like the final 

station.


Stalled out,

I lost myself 

In an unsolvable 

equation


Meeting you 

was the leap toward 

my heart's true 

destination


© 2020 Lyn Anderson


Author's Note

Lyn Anderson
hesitation and love's entry

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I think i have taken your place as the little queen, even your shorts have long depth...u muse me

Posted 1 Week Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Week Ago

Thank u nice to see you
"his to lose and hers to set free"
thematically, although 4 separate pieces, they link together in a similar theme...finding love without looking...without trying to force it...
and words not really not necessary...just being with....in comfortable silence.
that is all we need.
so good to read you again, Lyn.
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Lyn Anderson

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for stopping in again. I always appreciate your thoughts.

You have the incredible ability to make your reader believe you are writing just for them... or at least, wish you were.... I note you slipped an extra one in here.... x4 for the price of one... cheers...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyn Anderson

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much. I figure I can't come back and post them all separate - they'll get lost in the c.. read more
Neville

2 Weeks Ago


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Added on January 11, 2020
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Lyn Anderson
Lyn Anderson

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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