touch of the first time

touch of the first time

A Poem by amishra

Gazing at those sweet flowering fields outside my window..

i was reminded of the time when i first met my loved one..

the time when i was sitting between the same flowers

the sun kissed my face..

when he touched me for the first time...

© 2010 amishra


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Great pen down a little more poems for us

Posted 11 Years Ago


looks as if a nature poem..skill need applauses...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's very simple, sort of like a haiku.
It's scenic and peaceful. I like that especially with the image of the flowers and the start of love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice .

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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amishra
amishra

nainital, nainital, India



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