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A Poem by Imperfection
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Jorio

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I would give anything

To have you back

But you’re worth more

Than all I have.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Picture, courtesy photo.net gallery

Thanks to Nicholas Hallows for the suggestion.

 

© 2008 Imperfection


Author's Note

Imperfection
A Jorio is a form of poetry comprising of four lines with four words in each line.

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What is this guy doing now ? Is he laughing and having fun, living his life ? I hurt for you, but you also have to know in your heart he's not the only one. You pieces are so powerful, but I challege you to write of another man who touches your heart. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Very good write.
I think that you should switch the color of the font, to black.

A.M.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well this is definitely a great introduction to a Jorio. It is powerful and moving with such few words. Will have to try out this style of writing sometime. Thanks so much for entering it into the Missing Him, Missing Her contest.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love a good jorio......can you tell me all about jorio(s)? Thanks! I LOVE Rain's review! Cheers,lea

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! So powerful in so few words. This is so fantastic! Going into the favs!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You pack an awful lot into a very few words. I think you did a wonderful job. You convery your hurt without your poem sounding like an angry child.

I do wonder how it would sound to you if the word "anything" were changed to "everything". Your thoughts?

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Outstanding! Such great depth in a few words ... hugs

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting attitude (value of the poem). I think to say such words to a partner, that is gone, is making him strong but........the person herself/himself is naked.......weakened......I think no one deserves such words like this, for people already made their decition....right..nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


A true nugget of emotion.

Nicely done...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so poignant and to the point..love penned down

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You truly are the master of all forms of poetry! Hats off to you Caffeine!


Four lines saying so much!

Nice work.

~KA~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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