A little something that came to me this morning

A little something that came to me this morning

A Poem by ali
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I dont come up with rhymes often, so when I do, I have to post them here

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A love that left me bruised and scarred,
but not the kind where I'm abused or harmed.
He fills me with his love and hate
Neither of which I can reciprocate.

© 2011 ali


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ali
thats all i got....

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Wow, I love the unexpected viewpoint. Very refreshing. Opened my mind.

Posted 12 Years Ago


enjoyable flow and rhyme scheme. Written very nicely!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I want to be able to go to there.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This flows really nice, and is emotion felt. Nice little diddy. I think it feels quite complete...

Great Write!
RLG,
Tommy

Posted 13 Years Ago


It is quite complet in itself. Emotions shared in a fair way. Nice diciplined write. The temptation is always to villify and you have refrained from that. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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ali

Salt Lake City/ Moraga CA, UT



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