thinking is overrated

thinking is overrated

A Poem by anais.vionet
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too much thinking can lead to... things

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It's not your looks, I
like but what you are INSIDE
*talking to my fridge*

Sometimes I pretend
that I’m dying to see if
my cat would save me.

© 2020 anais.vionet


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anais.vionet
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This is so very funny and written nicely in these short stanzas, however I detect a more sombre note in its purpose, a warning not to overly complicate or globalise or problem elaborate and miss the point of life itself.

Posted 3 Years Ago


anais.vionet

3 Years Ago

Life can be so complicated - simplicity can be a relief =]
The cat wanted to share the hidden gifts. I agree, we can overthink things. Sometimes, we must do. Be fearless and hope we don't break no bones. Thank you dear Anais for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


anais.vionet

3 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote - it looks like you have read several pieces - how exciting! Thanks for commenting!
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I was glad to had found your work. You made my morning better. I enjoyed your work and you are welco.. read more
This was quite witty....and this is the first poem I came across in this site....good to get a sight.

Posted 3 Years Ago


anais.vionet

3 Years Ago

Thank you =]
Something new I stopped by, Nice! and promising one. Simple yet a promising intellectual write to create laughter. Keep writing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


anais.vionet

3 Years Ago

Thank you =]
You actually made me laugh aloud at both stanzas. A wit so sharp I may be bleeding... Oh crap I am! My amusement is leaking out all over the place, now I'll be depressed for days, and I have to wash the sheets.

Posted 3 Years Ago


anais.vionet

3 Years Ago

I was hoping to cheer someone up =]

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Added on November 1, 2020
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Tags: cats, thinking, teen, humor

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