thinking is overrated

thinking is overrated

A Poem by anais.vionet
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too much thinking can lead to... things

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It's not your looks, I
like but what you are INSIDE
*talking to my fridge*

Sometimes I pretend
that I’m dying to see if
my cat would save me.

© 2020 anais.vionet


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anais.vionet
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This is so very funny and written nicely in these short stanzas, however I detect a more sombre note in its purpose, a warning not to overly complicate or globalise or problem elaborate and miss the point of life itself.

Posted 10 Months Ago


anais.vionet

10 Months Ago

Life can be so complicated - simplicity can be a relief =]
The cat wanted to share the hidden gifts. I agree, we can overthink things. Sometimes, we must do. Be fearless and hope we don't break no bones. Thank you dear Anais for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


anais.vionet

10 Months Ago

Thanks Coyote - it looks like you have read several pieces - how exciting! Thanks for commenting!
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

I was glad to had found your work. You made my morning better. I enjoyed your work and you are welco.. read more
This was quite witty....and this is the first poem I came across in this site....good to get a sight.

Posted 10 Months Ago


anais.vionet

10 Months Ago

Thank you =]
Something new I stopped by, Nice! and promising one. Simple yet a promising intellectual write to create laughter. Keep writing :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


anais.vionet

10 Months Ago

Thank you =]
You actually made me laugh aloud at both stanzas. A wit so sharp I may be bleeding... Oh crap I am! My amusement is leaking out all over the place, now I'll be depressed for days, and I have to wash the sheets.

Posted 10 Months Ago


anais.vionet

10 Months Ago

I was hoping to cheer someone up =]

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Added on November 1, 2020
Last Updated on November 1, 2020
Tags: cats, thinking, teen, humor

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