Meanness

Meanness

A Poem by andreii93
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People are so mean, and I just can't figure out why. I always try to be a good person, but I always happen to be a victim. It's not right.

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People are so mean,

they make you feel like a little bean.

 

You try to give your best,

but you get a dagger into your chest.

 

You treat them well,

but you fall into a dark thorny shell.

 

You only ask for respect,

but to them you’re just a poor wreck.

 

So you say: «God, forgive them»,

‘cause these folks are getting closer to hell.

© 2012 andreii93


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Mia
The meanest people are the most insecure. they try to bring you down to feel better about themselves. This never works and they feel crap so they do it all over again. It’s not always easy. The hurt is evident in here. Nicely written. I'm sorry people are so mean to you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andreii93

11 Years Ago

Yep, you're right :) they just act like that because they feel too much insecure about themselves, a.. read more
Mia

11 Years Ago

Exactly! Don't let their negativity rub off on you :D
andreii93

11 Years Ago

:)



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The poem is really beautiful. It lets it's readers to experience "meanness". Thank You for sharing this poem.
Keep writing, Good Luck!

Posted 5 Years Ago


mean people are always gonna be mean. They only bring you down because you are above them. kill them with kindness and prove them wrong. stay strong!
-Chesney Chey(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


andreii93

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Chesney W.

11 Years Ago

ur welcome(:
Powerful write , some people want to drag drag you from the light , often as Mia says they are insecure and instead of growing and changing themselves they lash out and hurt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andreii93

11 Years Ago

Yep, that's it! :)
Your poem presents contrasting images very well. You show a good, kind intention, only to be paid back with something thorny, hurtful and bad. It's a short but powerful statement.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andreii93

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
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Mia
The meanest people are the most insecure. they try to bring you down to feel better about themselves. This never works and they feel crap so they do it all over again. It’s not always easy. The hurt is evident in here. Nicely written. I'm sorry people are so mean to you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andreii93

11 Years Ago

Yep, you're right :) they just act like that because they feel too much insecure about themselves, a.. read more
Mia

11 Years Ago

Exactly! Don't let their negativity rub off on you :D
andreii93

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on September 22, 2012
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andreii93
andreii93

Milan, Italy



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Andrea, 18 yrs old. I'm a fairly laid-back Italian guy who dreams of a better world. I don't claim myself to be a poet, nor I want to be considered a writer. I'm just a guy who enjoys writing. more..

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