Lie in the Grass

I’d rather die with the sun on my face.

To have the warmth around me

and the breeze flowing past me.

The coolness of the air

and the warm penetration of the sunshine

bringing me peace with life,

peace within my soul.

The sun shining down on my face,

bringing forth a smile

that has been long awaited.

Something so genuine

that only nature could create it.

My thoughts are gone,

completely erased,

they have been washed away.

I am one with myself and my innermost being.

The pain in my heart has deplenished.

The sunshine is my love.

Reviews

[Theo]

This is a great poem that generates nice images from the way the words are put together. I feel like I'm inside the world of the poem when I read this. You seem to have a very good mastery of poetry as a whole. Nice work!