A Story About an Angel and a Girl

A Story by Angel Bluestocking

There was a girl

Who fell in love

To an angel

From up above.

She was mortal.

He from heaven.

And they were

Far away

From each other.

"Naive and untrue",

That is what her friends said.

"Juvenile and stupid",

That is what she feared

Her parents would say.

Months and days more

They shared

Sweet words and promises.

Then one day

Her angel was gone.

She waited...

And waited.

Days turned to weeks.

Until one lonely night,

As she sat in her bed,

Her angel came

And whispered her name.

She was happy.

Truly she was.

Worried she was before,

Now everything forgotten.

She held him to her heart.

Far away he was

She loves him still,

And not a day passed

without her blissfully saying,

"I love you, my angel."

And he would smile,

Her angel,

And whisper back,

"I love you too, my love."

© 2012 Angel Bluestocking

Author's Note

i just thought about this~

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Trigorin

You've done a fairly good job here, and your use of simple, unaffected rhythm is very effective in this piece. I wish you'd have made more religious references to keep up the question for the reader as to whether or not this is an extended metaphor, and I feel like the very last line is a little lame, but on the whole you've done very well.