His Broken Smile

His Broken Smile

A Poem by Starrbitt

He walks around with a heavy heart

And smiles a broken smile


His clothes speak everything that's dark

And his eyes shatter for awhile


He drips with tears and spots the ground

With nothing but sorrow


When he speaks you hear no sound

And you know that tomorrow


He'll wake again all broken

And coated in salt


His scars will burn from being woken

And will yell at him to halt


They'll say stop crying boy

Or when you die you'll be alone


But he doesn't listen as people toy

With his feelings as he walks home


And when he opens up his door

Behind it is shadows of all sorts


That scream and beg for more

Tears that need escorts


So up the stairs he goes

Wishing their was someone he knew


That could stop these words at flow

And who could stop these tears of new







© 2012 Starrbitt

Author's Note

Random.. what do ya'll think

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Emotional, lyrical piece with such vivid imagery, very sad in a way and dark, well penned indeed :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its good (: its touching and descriptive nice job! keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on August 2, 2012
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I love anime if you couldn't tell, vampires, writing, and evil faeries! My favorite color is purple, I like to read about creatures and zombies, and I love making my own videos. more..

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