Clueless

     We're holding hands

     You say you love me

     And I say it too

     But really, your clueless

 

  I don't only love you...

 

     But your crooked smile

     The way you laugh

     The way you stare inside me

     How you never look back

   In life....

 

      I love the sound of your heart

      The way it speeds up

      The way it booms

      When I'm near you

   And you say...

       Mistakes are meant to be made

       But you and me are not a mistake

    Are we....

 

   

   We're hugging in the rain     

    You say you love me

      And I say it too

    But really, your clueless

 

  I love everything about you...

 

 

         

 

 

Author's Note

There's no real beat but I don't know...felt good to write.. Lol :)

Reviews

[New Dawn]

Lovely flow to this poem - poetry does not always have to rhyme - mine rarely does. So often a good piece of poetry is ruined by the writers need to make everything rhyme. I liked this Well done.

[MusicLover]

I love it. It is soooo amazing
and it does not matter if there is a beat or not. Its free verse

[Fang]

awww.that is so sweet. I think I'm going to cry

[xfallen5oldierx]

I find this a really sweet poem. Something I wish I could do in life but can't at the moment.

[Tasha]

I thought it was really sweet with or without a beat. This person will feel truly special. Wonderful, beautiful write.