Clueless

Clueless

A Poem by Starrbitt

     We're holding hands

     You say you love me

     And I say it too

     But really, your clueless

 

  I don't only love you...

 

     But your crooked smile

     The way you laugh

     The way you stare inside me

     How you never look back

   In life....

 

      I love the sound of your heart

      The way it speeds up

      The way it booms

      When I'm near you

   And you say...

       Mistakes are meant to be made

       But you and me are not a mistake

    Are we....

 

   

   We're hugging in the rain     

    You say you love me

      And I say it too

    But really, your clueless

 

  I love everything about you...

 

 

         

 

 

© 2012 Starrbitt


Author's Note

Starrbitt
There's no real beat but I don't know...felt good to write.. Lol :)

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Lovely flow to this poem - poetry does not always have to rhyme - mine rarely does. So often a good piece of poetry is ruined by the writers need to make everything rhyme. I liked this Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love it. It is soooo amazing
and it does not matter if there is a beat or not. Its free verse

Posted 9 Years Ago


awww.that is so sweet. I think I'm going to cry

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I find this a really sweet poem. Something I wish I could do in life but can't at the moment.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought it was really sweet with or without a beat. This person will feel truly special. Wonderful, beautiful write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 22, 2012
Last Updated on May 22, 2012
Tags: Love, Romance, Couples

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Starrbitt
Starrbitt

Oakhill, WV



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