HeartBeat

HeartBeat

A Poem by Victoria Scott
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I was sort of inspired by the song Stereo Hearts :) its not all that great but I thought id post it anyway haha

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I feel the base in every beat
I feel the rhythm in every street 
I hear the sound from every note
The radio tunes the words we wrote.

The lyrics stand as thought to be
To you heart, I hold the key
The volumes raised up to the sky
Drowning out its every cry.

The wind whistles our lullaby 
The leaves quench its calming sighs
The music fades to you and me
As we lift our voice in harmony.

Maybe here beneath the stars,
Or near the sounds from passing cars,
Maybe if love lifted up in voice
Then every word became every choice.

We don't need the stereo
To open secret hearts to show
To every fan in every row
As if we aired on the radio.

So tune our hearts to be entwined 
So the beat won't leave us both behind.
We'll take our music, hit the street
Play every note on every sheet,
Until the rhythm hits our feet,
And our hearts, in halves, they meet,
To sing along with the melody. 

© 2012 Victoria Scott


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I agree with just me, i could see that becoming a song very easily....
I really enjoyed this poem very romantic, sweet and it flowed well.
The rhymes were amazing which was great.
Had such a great story line to it.
Was definitely worth an award so congratulations!

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's a very catchy piece. It sounds a lot like stereo hearts and I'm sure if this was put to some music it would make a nice song.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really liked reading this. I like that you got inspired and just wrote. Good job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it. It flows really well, and makes you want to keep writing!! Great Job Victoria!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was cute! It's almost like a song...nice :) And I agree with Midori, it is catchy!

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow i love it!!!!!!!! its so catchy

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 24, 2011
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Victoria Scott
Victoria Scott

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