The Girl

The girl is a mess of well sewn imperfections.

Reviews

[Aura]

Oh yes! Don't we all have imperfections, but isn't the imperfections what make us imperfectly perfect? I love the one liner though! Short, straight to the point and the use of the words "well sewn" gives us an idea that the person has imperfections hard to get rid of! But imperfections can be someone else's perfection :) Thanks for sharing!

[light and ashes]

I think you hit the nail right on the head, Aura.
Thank you so much for reviewing.

[Aura]

You are most welcome!

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Yes imperfections in us all
Some hide it or mend better than others
Ooohh The hems gone down or the linings torn
Doesn’t mean it’s not a good garment afterall

Loved this short write it speaks volume of materials excuse my pun

[light and ashes]

I love what you had to say, Julie.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

You are very welcome
I hope you are well enjoy your night x

[light and ashes]

I am at least well-ish...
lol, you too.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Love that wellish
Well I hope you have a goodish weekend x

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

I’m Fineish thanks for asking ha ha

[light and ashes]

Killing me lol, I love it.

[willweb]

Such a cool one liner that really made me smile. I like this a lot.

[light and ashes]

Cool, thank you, Willweb.

[Nix is typing...]

So many emotions in one little sentence, it really leads the reader to think, "What kind of imperfections does this girl have?" I once heard someone say that "imperfections" were what made a person perfect. Like...your uniqueness is what makes a person "Uniquely you" (I think that's a makeup slogan lol)
I've never really thought of a one-liner being a whole poem, but this one line really speaks volumes, thank you for sharing :)

100/100

Nix ❤️️

[emmajoy]

How true meaning and true spirit should be.

[light and ashes]

Thank you, emmajoy :)

[emmajoy]

There are so many ways of viewing your words thus, interpreting them!

[light and ashes]

Awe, thanks! :)

[Patricia]

Nicely done and I love it

[light and ashes]

Thank you :)

[Pete]

so much said in one sentence. nice job. join the club. perfect is obnoxious. those aren't imperfections, those are the things that make us unique and lovable or 'hateable' depending on how you look at it. think how awful life would be if we were all the same. what would we even talk about? ... :)

[light and ashes]

Good point. Thanks.

[barleygirl]

I've been reading Shambala: Sacred Path of the Warrior (Chögyam Trungpa) & lesson number one is learning to love oneself & embrace one's blemishes! The first step to accepting other people's blemishes! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

............ you elevate kintsugi to a whole new level .................. bravo & much respect :)

[light and ashes]

Thank you :)

[barleygirl]

I'm thoroughly impressed by both of you. Love your observation & love Neville digging up the word "kintsugi" to relate to this! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[light and ashes]

You're one of the sweetest, Margie. Thank you so much.

[Neville]

yeah .. ditto