Blue Notes

Blue Notes

A Poem by angelinmypocket
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Written for Keeping the Dream Alive

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© 2008 angelinmypocket


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I enjoyed this read very much! Excellent take on the challenge phrase.
Poignant, sad.....but had a strength of surrender and letting go to
an impossible duet, when two people are walking parallell to each other
with different songs and instruments. I just loved the analogy!
Thank you for this beauty for my challenge!

Helena :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I won't say it is so sad this experience of yours because, Liz, we are poets and we invent lives! That's what we do, isn't it? Your poem is both sad and beautifully written. It cuts like a knife, straight to the heart, but it's a kind of pleasant stabbing--not pain but high admiration.

Sal

Posted 15 Years Ago


Awww!! this was very touching
I loved reading this piece
It was so profound with words
And it touched me literally

Great poem sweetie!!

Orlando M

Posted 15 Years Ago


Sad when sweet love songs turn to sour notes
Well penned
Ray { Not a Poet }


Posted 15 Years Ago


MOST EXQUISITELY BEAUTIFUL SIS, AND THANK YOU FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT AND GRAPHIC ON MAMMY DAEAREST LOVE ALWAYS YORU BROTHER LEWIS , LADY GODIVA

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Uau! Very very beautiful! Wonderful! Adorable! and as sad it may sound, it is a happy song because it will not go disonant in any of the people involved in singing together and that is beautiful and melody can go throught out the world and toutch more people! I really love it!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is well worth the second reading, my friend. And it still touches me just as much as the first time.

And I'm still up here on my table clapping and clapping and cheering wildly, for a beautifully written poem.

And I'm still shouting bravo, at the top of my voice.

Keep on singing your very OWN song, hon. And even if it's not a duet, it is STILL beautiful music!!! Some people just don't have good taste.

Great big hugs...
Jeri

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great write sis,
doreen

Posted 15 Years Ago


I enjoyed this read very much! Excellent take on the challenge phrase.
Poignant, sad.....but had a strength of surrender and letting go to
an impossible duet, when two people are walking parallell to each other
with different songs and instruments. I just loved the analogy!
Thank you for this beauty for my challenge!

Helena :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Although there's a deep sadness throughout this poem, it is penned and presented beautifully. Excellent work, my friend! Sharon

Posted 15 Years Ago


Liz, this beautifully written. It really touches my heart. It is so sad. My heart aches for you. I sure hate that you were hurt.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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