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A Story by angelinmypocket

A fantasy that's not really a fantasy


© 2008 angelinmypocket

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A little "cheesy" for my taste.
what with the graphics and bad html music.

However, the poem did warm my heart ;)
even If I hold no such faith

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Oh I love this,
perhaps because it's how I think! lol
hmm... Liz...
sooo, who sent you? lol j/k

"Do you exist only for me,
or do others know you too?"..

Wow! You have truly
tapped into my mind here!

"I catch a glimpse of movement from the
corner of my eye, and I know you exist,
but when I turn to face you, you are
never there.."

Yes.. I really get this. More than I
can express.

A truly awesome piece. Thank you.

(and there's that color blue again.. wow, I love it!)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Liz...There hs been times, when I felt as if there was someone else there with me. It is an eerie feeling, but at the same time a comforting one, too. I truly enjoy reading your poems. It seems as like I can relate to most of them. Whether they are true or not. Thank you for sharing them with me.


Posted 12 Years Ago

A wonderful poem sis,hugs m.m

Posted 12 Years Ago

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