Emptiness

Written For Keeping The Dream Alve Theme; Loneliness

Reviews

[Bryce Simonds]

If I didn't have my classic rock music mixing with this poem, I could have probably liked it more. But from what I read, I did enjoy reading it. Great job. Thanks for sharing.

-Bryce

[Orlando Murcia]

This was really sad
I am actually sad right now
I feel like giving up on God

This poem reminds me of being
in the pity I am in right now

I really liked this poem

Great job

Orlando M

[J.Black]

This was really sad.
Keep up the good work
kudos.
x

[Helena]

Liz, you hit the "Loneliness" contest head on again with this marvellous write.
Well penned , sentiments spot on and showing so well how we can be so
alone yet among millions of people.

Thanks for sharing and for Keeping the Dream Alive!

Helena

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Very, very lonely state of being! You've written this one perfectly for the challenge. I'm not going to be one of those passing faces, but rather one that flashes a smile your way. :-) Sharon

[emmajoy]

Sad, sad, sad ... your poems flows with tears .. a lovely post.

Good luck with the contest.