GEEK! Leave her out!

GEEK! Leave her out!

A Chapter by Rose

I wrote this after I went home from being bullied and feeling sick of people at my school















Girls in the classroom

Girls walking in the corridor

Nails and hair get it done

Big ball gown dresses

Get it slipped on and zipped up

It's time...

To get ready for the prom

But how shocked they were

When they heard

I don't like prom dresses

Stepped away from me

Like I was a disease

Laughing and questioning me

Why don't they leave me be

What girl does not like prom dresses?

Well that would be me


I don't know how they can find it amusing

Laughing and joking

I would hate to be you

They told me

As they checked their powdered faces

Glittered eye lids

Do you not wear make up?

Why me?

Why even ask me?

I'm fine without make up

They pushed me away like I was a freak

Why is your hair always the same?

Well clearly I don't want it cut

But they insist

I should have that bit there

I should put that hair to that side

When really I don't care


Why can't they let me be me

This is not fair

They mess up my hair

But leave me out

Of thier group anyway

They stare with hate everyday

You look so ugly

I hate your bag

Why they comment so bad?

It makes me feel so sad


I'm such a problem to everyone

I am left to be alone

If I'm not normal

Then what am I?



There always has to be

The one in the school

thats so uncool


© 2012 Rose

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It isn't common here to label people. I guess the saying, "Sticks and stones may break my bones, but words won't hurt me," I find that they may have to rethink this, more people have come to stumble and become hurt with words, Verbal abuse is just as bad as Physical, it all depends on the person. But I know how you feel, just the other day I got called a 'geek' for entering the library after school, but I'm a person who doesn't give a flying pigs butt about what people say, so I say what I think and sometimes tend to be up front and they shut up, knowing me, I don't take it from people, unintentionally. I liked this though, because everyone somewhere will relate to this, everyone will feel the same angst. I may not be able to relate to this, but I assure you that you don't have to put up with all their B.S, holding yourself together, shows you have much more dignity then all those girls put together. Nice write.

Keep writing,

Posted 10 Years Ago

Aww. Thankfully, I went to a school of "cool geeks", but I do know what it feels like to be criticised for stuff I don't care about. Congrats for standing your ground. It really is ridiculous.

Posted 10 Years Ago

i was uncool before uncool became cool. :D heck yea. this is good. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love this poem, and I want to meet the girl in it.

I'm male, but my experiences were similar. I was often left out, particularly when it came to sport (which I didn't care for), but never really felt picked on too much. Actually, I often felt I was respected for my intelligence. Clearly I was so put-off by the typical female that this is exactly the sort of person I now seek as a partner.

I like people who think for themselves, and it's the quiet geeky type who are some of the most interesting people to talk to. There is more going on in their head than thinking about superficial nonsense. For me, this poem is not only a reminder of my days at school, but also encourages me to keep looking for that special geek of my own.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I liked it, it shows the feelings of the 'geek' in a school.

I wasn't a geek I don't think, I didn't have a clique really. I was in the group of lads who played football constantly lol, but I can appreciate this.

Very well worded. 80/100

Posted 10 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I was the geek in my school. I know this feeling all too well.
No one will let you fit in if you try they laugh and pick on you.
This is a very well expressed write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 4, 2010
Last Updated on June 27, 2012
Tags: emotional, bully, hurt, heart, geek



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