My Dramatic Poem

My Dramatic Poem

A Chapter by Rose
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I wrote a dramatic flow for this poem so if anyone asks. Its suppose to be dramatic

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My heart is not complete

Just how close

How close

Are you to me?

Wait, my heart beats

And again

So glad it isn't dead

Its not nothing anymore

It's not useless, wortless or empty no more

 

Oh I travel so far

So far to get to you

How I beg so much for you

 

I will never give up

I won't stop trying

To seek every drop of love from you

 

I hope you find me

On the right tree

A great, red and juicy apple

My heart will be

 

My heart is waiting for a bite

From you with your teeth

Suck my love out

Leave me empty

 

I watch,

The sweet apple juice

Pouring out of me

 

My heart squeezed

like a sponge

The juice is pouring

I want you to come to me

So I can be set free

From hanging on this tree

 



© 2012 Rose


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Huh. I didn't see any of this coming. My favorite lines were the first four and the fourth stanza. I really enjoy the way you always use comparisons I never would have thought of.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this was an interesting write!!
sweet and sensual all at the same time.
'apple-licious'

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like this i think this is very well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like the allusions to an apple! The magnified and prurient manner in which this passion is compared to that fruit gives this poem its heart. The poem gets carried away by this in the second part but the first -although still well-put- could also carry this theme; planting the seed from the beginning. Good, though.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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