To God, Where is the love?

To God, Where is the love?

A Chapter by Rose
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I wrote this thinking of people who just hated me for being me and being strong enough to stick up for myself

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To God

Love is hard to seek

If you want to know why

Then take a peek

At my life

Of terror and destruction

Everywhere I go

There is hate

And people getting hurt

There are innocent people dying

Crying out there

But nobody cares

Crimes are happening more and more

Cruelity is caused every day

But now its made into a joke

Dares thats what they say

Dares to cause people harm

 

I am not worth a thing to anyone

I will never accept rubbish off their tongues

I know they lie to me

All they want is to turn me into them

A poor sneaky little thief

With no heart

Who would steal a purse off a old lady

Pushing themselfs to be better

Acting hard in a gang

Showing off

Then stabbing a stranger in the streets

 

Back off!

I am normal!

They are not!

 

I won't be in prison like them

I will be left out

To be in misery

To be treated different

So where is the love?

Oh please tell me

Answer me God!

Answer me...

Where is the love?

 

 

 

 

 



© 2012 Rose


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I have asked this question a lot and it is not something east to answer that is if it can be answered at all. I can relate. Why humans are the least humane off all creatures who really knows. Great write!

Voice

Posted 9 Years Ago


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~Z
This is one case I wish I could tell you that you are wrong.
Unfortunetly, I would start giggling, and my left eye would start to twitch because I know I'm wrong.
Love, along with justice and hope has seemed to slowly.. vanish? I don't know what to call it. It's just not the-
Am I rambling again?! Please forgive me. Anyway, nice flow. I could practically feel the emotion in this piece. Thank you.

~Z

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was a really intriguing poem! It posed a lot of questions, and provoked a lot of thought, and I liked how you were able to ask these really big, general questions through your own situation and your own story. You had a few spelling/grammar mistakes, but other than that, I thought that this was a really great write! Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Love can come not just from another person but you can also love yourself. Not in a narcissistic way but in a way where you don't need to feel love by anyone else. Pretty good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dear rosie....
I really loved this poem....It's brilliant piece of work...and so genuine.. :)
Love & Regards~sayandeep

Posted 9 Years Ago


great poem and ur outlook on the world is true and i happen to agree, but as the bible says, "in the last days, the love of many will wax cold."

Posted 9 Years Ago


:) I liked this a lot. Per the title itself, that's a really good question though I could venture a few guesses at the answers. The first stanza felt very chaotic and paints a vivid picture of the chaos contained therein. I like the defiant attitude in the second stanza and the way you outright call them on their b/s. In the last stanza, the one thing I would change (the only thing I would change in this entire poem), is "treated differently". It means the same and sounds better. Great job, Rosie. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very beautiful and thought provoking! It's an excellent question and it poem form you hit the nail write on the head.What you convey about being left to me is both good and bad. I think it is an awesome thing to say you would not be in prison like them. I rreally love it Good Job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I ask this all the time! Excellent poem!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is really good. It's really sad that people with their whole lives ahead of them throw everything away to impress other people. Keep making good choices!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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