Two Hearts and Two Souls

Two Hearts and Two Souls

A Chapter by Rose

I wrote this thinking about someone in my life what I love deeply.


How I long to hold

And touch him

Fear holds me back

I want to touch him all over

In many different places

Where beauty bursts

Like flowers underneath his clothes

Making me want to stroke

Every petal spreading it's true colours


The fear holds me

It keeps me chained

So I can not move

Fear that he would mistaken

Me for a joke

He's like a hot steamy iron

Steam floats out of his head

I will get burnt if I touched him

Scarred for life

It will sting for days and nights

His horrid look

Full of hate

Would flatten and scold me

The pain will last and be remembered

A laughing stock I will be

In front of my enemies

My hands will never touch again


I wish to be taken

Away with him

To a place more secure

More safe and alone

I don't want to ask him anything

I just want to hold and

Have him in my arms

Just like two souls and two hearts

If he asked me to speak

Nothing will come out of me

Well only three words

I love you!


© 2012 Rose

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Posted 10 Years Ago

This is lovely, although, not in an unaware way lol

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is my favorite of your poems so far.
The first stanza was really sexy in an... organic kind of way. Lol.
You conveyed your yearning and hesitation in a really unique way and I enjoyed the bit about him being compared to an iron. I've never thought of it that way before.
You're clever and I hope you get what you want.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Nicely expressed!
May all your wishes come true!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on June 2, 2010
Last Updated on June 28, 2012
Tags: emotional, romance, love, life, men



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