A Chapter by Rose

You sat there

While she got dressed

Taking her clothes off

All she had

Was lust in her heart

The power of lust

Made the bed feel dark


The real love,

I was thoughtful about

Felt killed

Choked by her kisses

Broken by her body

Chained by her filthy hands

Stabbed by her teeth

I felt like,

I saw my own death


But what did I do

To deserve this?

From you

Of all people

My love,

Can't you see

What you have done to me?


I must go

I must run

Before you can stop me

I will be gone

Before you know

Gone from your life



If you can


If you must

But nothing

Will bring me back


I will feel healed

Born again

From you crushing

My soul,

Breaking my heart in two


For once

I will be happy

As I did something good

And that's to break free

From living with you



© 2012 Rose

Author's Note

heart-break definitely

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This was a really captivating write! I liked how you seemed to pour everything you had into this piece, as it made it a really believable and relatable poem. There were moments, particularly towards the end, where I felt as though you lost some of the intensity that was prominent at the start of the piece, but in saying that, I liked the fact that you were able to showcase the multiple dimensions of such a situation in a really simple and hard-hitting way. Great work,

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Definite heartbreak. Really entrancing!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Great write. Involved and intriguing. Your emotions are punched at the reader at first subtly and then full out. Calm winning conclusion of self confidence and being.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Amazing poem I like it

Posted 10 Years Ago

wow, I was immersed throughout! This is a great piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago

I loved this write!! It was great. (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

I often think this is one of the most cruel of betrayals, someone you love and trust doing something like this.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Being betrayed this way is one of the most awful ways and I have felt that betrayal before. Betrayal comes in many forms and varying degrees. This is one that crushes the heart. the emotions are clearly laid out in this poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This is a painful story but one many people experience. It's hard to realize sometimes that you're being used or this relationship is going no where.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Painful write to read. Very sad. I could almost hear your heart breaking. Great job. Change the word to undress instead of dress. Fabulous write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

oh so sad.... albeit beautifully penned in poetic expression~ very nice!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on October 1, 2010
Last Updated on June 28, 2012
Tags: break, pain, cry, tears, hate, life, bed, lust



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