Adultery

Adultery

A Chapter by Rose

You sat there

While she got dressed

Taking her clothes off

All she had

Was lust in her heart

The power of lust

Made the bed feel dark

 

The real love,

I was thoughtful about

Felt killed

Choked by her kisses

Broken by her body

Chained by her filthy hands

Stabbed by her teeth

I felt like,

I saw my own death

 

But what did I do

To deserve this?

From you

Of all people

My love,

Can't you see

What you have done to me?

 

I must go

I must run

Before you can stop me

I will be gone

Before you know

Gone from your life

 

Cry,

If you can

Beg,

If you must

But nothing

Will bring me back

 

I will feel healed

Born again

From you crushing

My soul,

Breaking my heart in two

 

For once

I will be happy

As I did something good

And that's to break free

From living with you

 

 



© 2012 Rose


Author's Note

Rose
heart-break definitely

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This was a really captivating write! I liked how you seemed to pour everything you had into this piece, as it made it a really believable and relatable poem. There were moments, particularly towards the end, where I felt as though you lost some of the intensity that was prominent at the start of the piece, but in saying that, I liked the fact that you were able to showcase the multiple dimensions of such a situation in a really simple and hard-hitting way. Great work,
~PaperHearts

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Definite heartbreak. Really entrancing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great write. Involved and intriguing. Your emotions are punched at the reader at first subtly and then full out. Calm winning conclusion of self confidence and being.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing poem I like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


wow, I was immersed throughout! This is a great piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I loved this write!! It was great. (:

Posted 9 Years Ago


I often think this is one of the most cruel of betrayals, someone you love and trust doing something like this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Being betrayed this way is one of the most awful ways and I have felt that betrayal before. Betrayal comes in many forms and varying degrees. This is one that crushes the heart. the emotions are clearly laid out in this poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a painful story but one many people experience. It's hard to realize sometimes that you're being used or this relationship is going no where.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Painful write to read. Very sad. I could almost hear your heart breaking. Great job. Change the word to undress instead of dress. Fabulous write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


oh so sad.... albeit beautifully penned in poetic expression~ very nice!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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