Keeping You

Keeping You

A Chapter by Rose

In my bedroom

Sitting alone

Water in my eyes

If feels ages

Since I last saw you


But really

It was a couple

Of hours ago

We were standing

In the school playground


My eyes

Couldn't get enough of you,

Standing tall

Like you know it all

With your big quiff

And smooth sexy lips


I bet you never knew why

I acted like

I was falling apart

More and more

As I was dragged

Away from you


I don't care

If you think your a player

Trust me

I can turn you around


The way I talk

So persuading because

It is so true

When I look at you

In the eyes

I say and feel

I want to keep you for life


I bet

You will give me a shock

Crying on my doorstep

Wishing someone

Could treat you better


It's something that

I have always dreamed of

How can I ever

Refuse to want you.



© 2012 Rose

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Love is blind, it empowers us and creates us anew. It can also be crippling if you let it. This was a fine piece on the aspects of that kind of love, wonderful.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A heart-touching poem. Love sometimes makes us believe our near incredible thoughts and feelings. Its something like pure power that makes us feel capable of doing anything and everything. But at the same time, it leaves us helpless and so very dependent upon the one person we shower our affection on.
The last two lines say it all : "How can I ever refuse to want you."
Beautifully written. Keep up the good work. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

you beautifully display your feeling in this poem with much love, care, and dedication. you open your heart through your writing and i can see that clearly. i love the way you write, i could feel what you felt as you spilled your heart to the world through your poem. great write and hope to read more from you soon.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This is good it is diffirent IMHO diffirent in many ways I believe you want to establish a relationship with the subject of this write and have a new(to me) way of establishing the ground work to say I am intregued by the way you write would be an understatement.

Posted 10 Years Ago

There is such a strength and longing here.. to love and give, come what may. You beautifully confess the depth of you, your feelings and passion, and that last line is simply stunning.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on November 3, 2010
Last Updated on June 28, 2012
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