Time to Write

Have you ever noticed?

 

when profound thoughts come to  mind

when that moment of lucidity strikes

when you are emotionally charged  

when your fingers desire to

flick across those intimate plastic keys--

 

a hindrance to

fulfilling the desire--

 

the world works according to--

its own time

its own needs

its own demands

 

I have just these five minutes before  I--

bend to the will of the clock

demands of my life  

commitments I have made

 

plans are important--

but at this moment 

I want to let my thoughts escape

a brimming brain--

 

to find their way

from cortex to finger tips

where they are free--

 

 Buzzz!!!

 

the timer tells me

to force my thoughts

into tidy boxes

to wait--

 

 for time,

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I find my moments of lucidity are almost always from the moments between deep sleep and waking up.From them come almost all my own works.

[Angelique]

I've just noticed that some of the punctuation was changed after pasting this poem from from Word. The " marks should be dashes (--).

[Katherine S.]

This is an interesting poem, it's different from most poems I've read, but that's certainly not a bad thing. Nicely written. :)

[Wórdsmíth]

great one it is. well expressed in your words. buzzzzzzzz, last phrase looks alike a overall conclusion of it....lol, yeah, it's time to write...so, hey, why're you walkin' with your dog, just get the couch n start to read n write...lol
beautiful write. good luck for your next write.