Morbid Love

This like much else is a work in progress. As some of you may have noticed I have changed the angle on the overall story. Instead of the main character being obsessed with finding love she is obsessed with beauty of changing life. What ultimate change in life is there than death? Feel free to comment and review any aspect that you want. Tell me what you like and what you could live without. Grammar is always in need of correction so do not hesitate to point out my mistakes. Just remember to keep it constructive.