Fallen Angel

Fallen Angel

A Poem by mi-chan

Hiding in the crowd around you

I'm the only one who can see

that devilish thought moving throughout your mind

the only one, the only one.

 

I'm the only one who can see

your blackened horns and crimson tail

the only one, the only one

who knows the real you.

 

Your blackened horns and crimson tail

tear through innocent honest minds

Who knows the real you?

The you who lives to hear those bloody screams.

 

Tear through innocent honest minds

keep on going, keep on going

the you who lives to hear those bloody screams

you will have to realize this one day.

 

Keep on going, keep on going

painting your entirety black

you will have to realize this one day

that no one will love you but me.

 

Painting your entirety black

I see your figure beginning to fall

that no one will love you but me

makes you accept your pure emotions.

 

I see your figure beginning to fall

I come to your aid, to your side

makes you accept your pure emotions

my love, your love, ours.

 

I come to your aid, to your side

You take me in your arms

my love, your love, ours

spreads throughout your heart.

 

You take me in your arms

Hiding in the crowd around you

spreads throughout your heart

that devilish thought moving throughout your mind.

 

Hiding in the crowd around you

I'm the only one who can see

that devilish thought moving throughout your mind

the only one, the only one.

© 2011 mi-chan


Author's Note

mi-chan
*chuckles to herself* It's so hard for poems like these to make sense at the end (I forgot what this kind of poem is called ^^"). If I spent more time with it, it would probably turn out better, but I'm ok with leaving it at this.

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I liked it. The pattern you used was cool.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice, especially the "my love, your love, ours" ^^
I like that the scheme is a little choppy because it keeps you tryng to figure it out. Great job mi-chan XD

Posted 9 Years Ago



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mi-chan
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I like writing, reading, anime, manga, japan, yaoi, jmusic (not listing all the genres), drawing, volleyball, and many other things. I've been playing the piano for about 10, maybe 11 years now and ha.. more..

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