What I wished

What I wished

A Poem by deepblue04

What I wished happened when I was little.....

 

I wished my dad would play so playfully with me.

I wished my dad would have a nickname for me

I wished that I could tell anything to my dad...

 

I wished that I didn't have to be so tough.

I wished that I wasn't the oldest.

I wished that I wasn't expected so much.

 

I wished that my mom could understand me.

I wished that she could've eased up on me.

I wished that she let me be socially active....

 

These are some things that I thought of,

but I knew that they were trying to provide a good life for me.

But I kind of need somewhere to vent,

if you know what I mean...

© 2012 deepblue04


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A very pure, honest, heartfelt poem. Excellently written, fantastic work! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


deepblue04

11 Years Ago

thank you so much!
♪The Girl Next Door♪

11 Years Ago

my pleasure :)

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