Time

Tick tock

Time is going by every second,

every minute,

every moment.

 

It going by too quickly.

I want to freeze it at times,

when I need it the most!

 

Tick-Tock

It's passing me by.

I wonder if I'm doing everything that

I wanted to do

before times up.

 

Am I living life right?

Tick-Tock

Am I doing all that I should?

 

At times I feel like

I'm loosing it,

waisting it.

 

But I want to do so much more!

 

Tick-Tock

It's passing me by.

I wonder if I'm doing everything that

I wanted to do

before times up.

Author's Note

thoughts? If theres grammar mistakes please let me know!

Reviews

[Aehr]

I can completely relate to this one!! sometimes.. i really think about when 'time's up' and that will i ever be able to do what I want to in life. I enjoyed this one a lot...

Gotta shelve it!!!

[deepblue04]

thanks!!!

[Aehr]

welcome... anytime for a poet/writer...

[Tai Ryens]

"it" in the second stanza should be changed to "it's" other than that, I see no problem. Interesting concept, I like it.

[deepblue04]

thanks!

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Excellent poem!
This is is very well written.
100/100

[deepblue04]

thank you so much!

[Soulfulbubbles]

very nice... simple but lovely
:)

[deepblue04]

thanks