post-it note 5

post-it note 5

A Poem by deepblue04

Here is something to start the day right,

yes, i understand that you don't eat in the morning,

but you need to

so here's the granola bar and your energy!

© 2012 deepblue04


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deepblue04
thoughts???

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Post-it notes make the world go 'round. I call it my paper memory.

Posted 8 Years Ago


The granola bar is at least something to give energy i the morning. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


ummmmm.what should i say.you sounds like my mom and sis.......especially mom..putting a mouthful of spoon full of cornflakes in my mouth every morning....saying the same thing early in the morning......but anyway.it's simple and pretty nice .can i ask you what came up in your mind when you wrote it!??

Posted 8 Years Ago


deepblue04

8 Years Ago

well, i had thoughts of my roommate, who has now disappear from my life, and how she says that she w.. read more
cute!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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deepblue04
deepblue04

DeRidder, LA



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Hi! My name is Susan. I love reading and writing poetry! I will accept any friend request and will review any type of writing. I like to listen to k-pop/rock, rock. Blue is my favorite color. M.. more..

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