Is that really me?

Is that really me?

A Poem by deepblue04

I have ponder at who I was for a while

not the me on the outside,

but the me on the inside

 

I never really knew before how horrible i was on the inside

while on the outside, I throw a smile on my face

and act like nothing's happening to me

 

but now I realized it

 

I realize never knew how afraid I was of being alone

but now that has come into recognition

 

because now I'm more alone than ever

 

 

© 2012 deepblue04


Author's Note

deepblue04
some personal things, I might add as I go along, thoughts?

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Deep thoughts, you've obviously been doing some thinking on this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A pretty sincere thought...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Recognizing self and coming to grips with who we are is the first step in building self-esteem. When we honestly see a fault in ourselves then we can work on improving. That's the message I see here.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I have a poem similar to this about who "you" really are. As much as it sucks to be alone, I feel it puts more ink into the pen, you become more creative in my opinion. I really like this poem. Very good!

Posted 8 Years Ago


deepblue04

8 Years Ago

thanks!
Pondered at you mean
Very nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


deepblue04

8 Years Ago

thanks
I really like the idea we all have secrets, and things hidden under us. I think both of the inside or outside is a part of us... And although we may act towards some people, we never know, maybe telling them our real feeling is better...
A Really thoughtful write :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


deepblue04

8 Years Ago

thank you!
very promising effort here, the honesty is what captures the reader in this case. i love the idea and theme, clean up your organization a little and you'll have a home run, otherwise, i absolutely love it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


deepblue04

8 Years Ago

thank you!
quinfinn

8 Years Ago

;)
Sometime we are harder on on self then the people around us. Life allowed us to make many mistakes and learn what is important. I like the search and the answer found in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


deepblue04

8 Years Ago

thanks

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