What to do with you

What to do with you

A Poem by deepblue04
"

there's this guy i've been talking to since the beginning of the semester, I find him a bit different from the rest

"

Ever since I figured out

that we came from a similar area,

that there would be so much

that we could talk about

 

then I started to know you,

through our conversations

and hanging out with each other

 

I know that it is natural

that feelings naturally start to come up

but I think I'm starting to fall for you

a bit too quick

 

I've know you for probably two months

and things that you like, I like

But I really don't know what I should do about these feelings

 

© 2012 deepblue04


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it's relatable tbh. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aww really cute!! :) I've been there and you should definitely tell him!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


True to the heart and sweet, you should most definitely tell him... not fast at all when you like someone ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


I find this cute. So u got feelings for this guy huh? Find that perfect moment to tell him... :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


yes, I can sense your wanting to hold back, but your not exactly sure how. Or, at least, that's the feeling I got. I liked this, I could clearly see what you were trying to say. But know what I say? Don't play around the topic, just flat out ask if he likes you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your poem makes a nice statement about being honest with yourself. Infatuation with a new friend can be very chancy. Don't trust your feelings or heart by themselves. We're not animals. Use your intelligence and reasoning, along with your emotions, to carefully and honestly evaluate who a person really is. Give it some time to ferment. Then write a nice poem to them.

Posted 8 Years Ago


it is good to have people to talk to. I tell people. Don't rush things that are important. It is good to have friends with something in common. I have lost good friends because I was moving too fast. Patience allow us to appreciate the good times. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


deepblue, I find that most of your work is general. I'm interested in the story behind this and would love it if you could make some really specific references to what you and this guy have done (i.e. studied in the library, shared laughs over an inside joke that you could explain, maybe the passing in corridors or anything cute that girls would really relate to).

Posted 8 Years Ago


i agree with quinfinn, a very introspective write. get to know him a bit more and trust me, if you really do like him, you'll know when you actually fall for him.
A nice, innocent write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


an honest and introspective write, clearly from the heart. be yourself and share your feelings

Posted 8 Years Ago



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