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A Poem by deepblue04

It's been feeling rather cold in Louisiana

Alas the rain started falling half-way into my day,
The weather started to get colder,
and nastier.

What did the school do?
Ah, they just only cancelled the next two days.
But what do I have to do just to get food
in a campus?
That's right, just walk ten minutes
in the cold, rain that has frozen onto the trees.

However, I believe that the scenery is beautiful.
Because just seeing the icicles that are on the trees
make them all the more appeal to them.

© 2013 deepblue04

Author's Note

just a simple write off the top of my head

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Hey i just wanted to see how things have been coming along ,did you have to really walk some where at school.But i like it simple and to the point....

Posted 10 Years Ago


10 Years Ago

yeah, im in college and at a dorm, so it's easy to walk around and it's a small campus
I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. I grew up in the mountains of West Virginia, and winter weather was always something I loved looking at. Hate walking through it though :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on January 16, 2013
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