The Ocean

The Ocean

A Poem by Anna
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With all the bad, there is always good:)

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drowning
gasping for air as my head is pulled under forceful waves
powerful and persuasive as they push me under
flailing my arms, trying to break through
suddenly tumultuous waves go tranquil
the raging war has stopped and im able to breathe
the vast ocean so peacefully beautiful
everything at a stand still, a dreamy state
in times of turmoil, there will always be contentment

© 2018 Anna


Author's Note

Anna
honest feedback:) I really want to improve as a writer so constructive crictisim would be appreciated :)

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I love the ocean, it is so peaceful and beautiful. Enjoyed your write here, so nicely penned. Amazing!

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Added on August 11, 2018
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Anna
Anna

Denver, CO



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