Cultivation

Nothing eloquent,

can be said,

of self inflicted doom.

Only rivers of

elegance

form from the tears

of enlightened

liberation.

 

Reviews

[Zugzwang]

Hello. Do you mean self inflicted doom?
I see you have written self inflected which I find confusing.
Perhaps it's my tiny brain at issue here.

[Anna]

Thanks, not your brain, my fingers making typos that's all. I'm suprised no one else caught that one, really.

[Zugzwang]

No worries. Looks like its all good now. It's a good poem anyways, I like the staggered lines.

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
What was your inspiration for the elegant work?

[Latifa]

beautiful,short and meaningful

[Muse]

Very pretty...

Simple but effective.

[Auden]

I like this a lot, very deep.