Walk with me

Walk with me
let me set you free
let me show you
the pettiness you're condemned to see
spread your wings
go ahead and fly
open your mouth and sing
to this injustice called "Life"

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

Your right, we condemn ourselves when we follow words that look only on injustices of life and it's trials.
We must learn to over look so much of the pettiness and negativity otherwise we are just flapping our wings.

wow ! you said a lot in little words.

[annalysiar]

Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it and you're right life is so much more than negativity

[Cryingkate]

Thank you for saying it first :-)

[annalysiar]

😇😃😄😏

[mou]

It is short but self sufficient words make it more.
It is wonderful!!
A profound piece.
Thanks for sharing.

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words mou😃😃

[Rafy T.Nym]

It's a beautiful poem with significant meaning!

The style does not have rhyming words.But, when I was reading your work, it felt like the words were closely connected with each other giving an illusion of rhyming. That's a wise work,no doubt.

[annalysiar]

Thank you, truth be told it took a while to string those words together...i think that might be why. Thank you for your kind words I'm really glad you enjoyed it😃😃😃

[Rafy T.Nym]

You're welcome. :-)

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Life is a blinding thing, so mundane and clouded. If our eyes could be opened to the truth, then it would be beautiful, but that is unlikely to happen anytime soon.

Very powerful poem, I love it and, as always, look forward to reading more!

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words again. I'm very glad you read and I ask look forward to reading some more of your writing

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thank you :D and my pleasure

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

wow, this is amazing and beautiful. I love this write!!!!!!!!!!!

[annalysiar]

Thank you, shadowfax. I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome, i really did enjoy it a lot

[annalysiar]

I'm glad its amazing when people enjoy my writing😃😃

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

yeah, it is

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and beautiful poem. Offer of friend and walk. A great gift. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[annalysiar]

Thank you for reviewing and for reading😃😃
I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.

[Alias]

smoothly written, yet cynical and analytical. Excellent piece

[annalysiar]

Thank you I'm glad you liked it😃😃

[Jon of York]

I see you understand something very profound about life: the way we choose to see it becomes the way it is.

[annalysiar]

Thank you😃😃

[Meeks]

I like the idea, that each human has wings. It kind of relates humans to angels, who are simply forced into 'life'.

On the other hand though, the fact that life has so many bad parts makes the good ones so much better.
Keep writing, it can only get better!

[annalysiar]

Thank you for your kind words

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes that is all people see....the negative, the pettiness....not a pretty world to live in.

and life does have its good sides if we look hard enough.

[annalysiar]

Oh so true Mr Cilberto...thank you for reading I hope you enjoyed it