Nightmarish Memory

Memories that keep you up at night...what can they really be called

In my dream
I see me and you...
perhaps this dream is a nightmare come true
take my bleeding heart
and tear it apart
colorful bruises mask my part

In my dream, I can lie and let go
This nightmare is my stage less show.
Here I stand
your merciless doll
take my body and have your call
Whispering shadows guide me so
say you love me just for show

Oh this dream of you and me
This nightmare is my memory...
scars cover once flawless skin
The rush that comes...
from touching the End

Dancing along Deaths edge
Shadows grace me
upon the devils bed
Whispering voices
feather like touches

Dancing dreams with innocents blushes
slapped away by a bruising hand
This is my nightmarish dream land.

Reviews

[Obscured by the Shadows]

I do hope this isn't a true memory, that is traumatic; yet, it is so dark and beautiful. I can imagine what happened to you, the pain you must have felt. The betrayal. Evoking such strong emotions on a reader takes talent, talent that you possess.

Thanks for sharing!

[annalysiar]

What I endured, his words were like hits, took me down so far.
and you're right the pain and betrayal I felt more towards myself...
but is in the past, and only comes out at night😃😃
I am glad you read and enjoyed my poem 😃😃😃

[Obscured by the Shadows]

I love your poetry. I love poetry in general. Especially those that speak of love, or pain as this one does. I recently went through a painful experience inflicted upon me by the one I love, I am dealing with it, and it is hard. Writing is my outlet.

[annalysiar]

Yes, pain from those you open yourself to and come to love is the worst. This I can empathize with. Writing is a great outlet, and so is talking. If you need to talk I will listen.
remember, you survived and in that you are strong. You are coming out and in that have hope. For yourself...

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Thank you, strong words and strong hope is all I can hold onto.

[annalysiar]

You are welcome. Us women need to stick together in times like these

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Indeed....

[ExquisiteEyes]

Beautiful but tragic. The feelings of pain and hoping to escape have been expressed very nicely.
I hope its nothing more then a dream now...

[annalysiar]

I think the only thing I imagine is my stories...
I'm really glad you enjoyed this and that you read it, thank you

[Archos]

Beautiful poem. So sad, though! I like your work with words and how you express emotions so clearly. Why don't you divide it into stanzas? It would look better, in my opinion.

[annalysiar]

You know armin I agree. And it will be done. Thanks for the tip😉
also thank you for reading I'm glad you enjoyed it😃😃😃

[annalysiar]

I fixed it, I hope it helped

[Archos]

As for me, I like it a lot more this way.

[annalysiar]

Me too thanks for the pointer😃😃😃

[B. Boileau]

Imagines of abuse and sadly a love tied by a dream of what once was.
An emotional and vivid piece.

bill

[annalysiar]

Thank you for reading it makes me very happy...
I'm glad you enjoyed this and you are completely right😃

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

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[annalysiar]

Thank you, you are kind. I honestly thought this was nonsense

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome, thanks and this write was no nonsense at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[annalysiar]

Lol thank you again, you're kind

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

lol welcome and thanks