Dance in the Hues

Dance in the Hues

A Poem by Alyssa Carlstrom

A day will come when you will not know what to do.
There's no telling when, but I'll give you a clue.
You will be older - much, much older.
Maybe you'll wish you were someone else, or maybe a blue day will come down your road.
You have many different options for an escape,
but I'll tell you one of the best ways.
Whether it's grey and rainy or yellow and bright,
dance in the hues with all your might.
Sure, there will be days when you want to give up, but keep on the fight.

When you dance in the hues, you will see someone new.
It will be odd at first, but never stop doing what you do.
You will make it through this,
it just takes you doing your best to dance in whatever hue comes your way.

© 2013 Alyssa Carlstrom


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Alyssa Carlstrom
Picture is not by me. Found on Goolge Images.

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Interesting and captivating read, truly enjoyed thanks for sharing


Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nice Imaginary i must say. You'e too got a talent to write. I'm still working on a book and there's one chapter i've written , the name's "RAIN"... so, i think yu've forced me by your this write to write some more on it... i've read some writers view here and i've got talent from here......and you're from one of them too.
kkeep writing, I''ll read your more writings... :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very much inspirational piece.
These lines are my favorite:
"Whether it's grey and rainy or yellow and bright,
dance in the hues with all your might.
Sure, there will be days when you want to give up, but keep on the fight."

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was a really good one. I'm not too sure that doing whatever the one in this piece is doing will let him be able to leave it, but that's just my thinking. Awesome write. Wonderful to read your stuff

Posted 11 Years Ago


good poem

Posted 11 Years Ago



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