One Last Time

One Last Time

A Poem by Ann Outlaw

One Last Time

By

Ann Outlaw

You're gonna kill me or hate me
Maybe both in time 

We swore it was over
But can I see you one last time

A proper goodbye is what I ask
An ode to this foolish life of crime

I still see us young and free
In our prime
Break up to make up
Extra vodka, a little lime 

The game we liked best
Like a prisoner doing time 

Can I see you tonight 
I promise, just one last time 
 

© 2023 Ann Outlaw


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The invitation One Last Time seems intriguing and so interesting. A lot could happen in that one last time. Perhaps, the chasm could be bridged or perhaps the bridges could be burnt forever. Either way, there would be lessons learnt and realizations made. The rhyming was great to read too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ann, love this... a this or that approach and let's face the thing. lastly Iove the extra vodka.. its just forward and forward and forwad

Posted 1 Year Ago


We needed that, it's better than leaving without a proper closure. Don't let anything left unsaid. I enjoyed reading this poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Here's hoping their answer is..."You can come by on one condition...that a last time never happens."
Seems these things are front and center in your mind my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ann Outlaw

1 Year Ago

That comment put a smile on my face today. I should take a break today 😅 thanks for the words, al.. read more

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Added on February 20, 2023
Last Updated on February 20, 2023
Tags: love, love affair, adult, romance

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