Love Letters

She is shedding tears over an open envelope
It is empty like her eyes, like her arms, like her heart, like her home
Because when he left there was nothing left to say.

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

Ahhh...it's a piece....it's damn painful, you know what this's a true love or may be a true pain, "envelope opens n it's empty like her heart, she felt pain...damn much pain when he left her alone n to him, she'd nothin' to say, because she'd broken from heart already....
that's what a i felt here....well penned, i liked this piece much because your these words showed your pain...your real pain towards him...but he doesn't care about your pain....what a nice thoughts...

this's called true love n true love always breaks like an oak tree that ccan't b grow up well, but incase it is..... anyhow then it takes much time to hold leaves that're your heart....

nice wrintin' :)
have this 100/100...!!

[Elle Thompson]

thank you :)
I get a lot of criticism for being overly cryptic, but I think in this case it is justified.