I WISH THAT YOU'D BE MINE

IT'S A POEM I HAD WRITTEN WHEN I WAS 17. THE WORDS OF THIS POEM ARE ALL ORIGINAL AND POURED STRAIGHT FROM MY HEART AND MY MIND ON TO THE PAPER. COMMENTS ARE WELCOMED.

I DON’T KNOW WHY AM I SO SAD,                                       IT’S LIKE I EVERYDAY I MISS YOU BUT TODAY I CRAVE FOR YOU REALLY REALLY BAD                              IT’S NOT THE USUAL FEELING,                                         IT IS A DIFFERENT ONE                                                         

 I DON’T KNOW THE SAME HAPPENS TO YOU,                    IT KILLS ME FROM INSIDE EVERYDAY OR TWO.              IT’S NOT A GOOD SIGN NEITHER IT IS A BAD,                SOMETIMES I LAUGH UPON MYSELF THINKING WHAT KIND OF IMAGINATIONS I’VE HAD.                                                  

SOME SAY THAT YOU’RE PRACTICAL,                               SOME SAY THAT I AM MAD                                                       SOME SAY THAT YOU’RE GOOD,                                           SOME SAY THAT I AM BAD.                                                               IT MAKES ME A BIT BEWILDERED ABOUT OUR PERSONAS TOO,                                                                                 SUCH FEELINGS I HAVE NEVER HAD!!

AT TIMES I HEAR THAT I AM IN LOVE ,                                            AT TIMES I AM TOLD THAT IT’S APART OF OUR LIVES  SOMETIMES IT’S ALSO PROJECTED TO ME AS A MISCONCEPTION,                                                                    SOMETIMES ALSO AS ATTRACTION.                                   WHAT IS IT BETWEEN THE TWO OF US THAT I COULD NEVER MAKE OUT?                                                                            DID YOU FIND THAT OUT?

I KNOW THIS IS CRAZY, BUT WHAT CAN I DO,                         IT MADE ME FEEL GOOD SO I WROTE IT DOWN TOO                I AM THE ONE RESPONSIBLE FOR ALL THE CRAP THAT I DO,                                                             I KNOW I AM A BAD POET, BUT ITS MY FIRST TIME             I SOMETIMES WISHED I COULD PEEP INTO YOUR HEART TO SEE WHAT WAS GOIN’ ON,                                                                   

IF THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN POSSIBLE IT’D BE A BLESSING OF MY LIFETIME.                                    BUT I GUESS THIS TIME IT WON’T END LIKE EVERY OTHER TIME,                                                ARE YOU A SECRET ADMIRER OF MINE?                                          I WISH THAT YOU’ BE MINE AND THIS SHOULD LAST LONG, FOR A LIFELONG TIME,                                                             I WISH YOU’D BE MINE               I WILL ALWAYS WISH FOR YOU TO BE MINE.

Author's Note

IGNORE MY GRAMMAR MISTAKES. ALL THOUGHTS ARE WELCOMED. PLEASE DONT USE INAPPRPRIATE WORDS IF YOU DONT LIKE THE POEM. LOVE YOU ALL.

Reviews

[Cas]

i really liked how this flowed (doubt that's spelt right oops)!